话题概括一下就是：谈谈你对当代青少年追求标新立异，与众不同的看法。
下面是我写的，我高一。这作文要拿去参加个比赛的。
我觉得写的好烂啊，求帮忙。
My view of being unique
Nowadays, more and more teenagers want to appear unique . They prefer to wear
strange clothes , listen to unusual music ,and even do silly things to make themselves
different . Because they think that being unique is a fashion , it can leave a deep
impression on people ,and maybe in this way they can be famous.
As to whether it is worthwhile to be unique , however, people hold different
attitudes .Some people are willing to be ordinary , they are glad to live peacefully.
But teenagers have their own opinions .They think the world is a large stage , if we
want to stand out , we should try our best to be unique .{ On the other hand , a majority
of parents don't think so. Although they want their children to be unique , it means to
be outstanding . So we have to study all the time . Only in this way could we get
excellent grades.}
To be honest ,I agree with those parents. Doing unique things and being different
from others isn't the true uniqueness . In my view , if we could develop our specialities ,
and do well in some fields , being unique is the way to success . The reasons are as
follows .First ,now we are entering a new century , full of opportunities and challenges.
Second ,it is said that two leaves are not exactly the same to each other in the world .
Just think of Jay Chou .He is a singer who is not handsome at all. But he gives the new
sense to R＆B music ,using his unique traditional chinese style . What's more , his
unique lyrics and melodies make me feel at ease .It is his musical talent that leads
him to success . We all have our own specialities , so why not hold opportunities and
show ourselves to the world ? In order to be unique ,we still have a lot more to do.
We should no longer waste our present time.
In conclusion , everyone has his own way to live a life . Be unique ,work hard ,
on our own goals ,and walk along the way we have choosen, we will get close to success.
1.第二段大括号内内容老师说文不对题，我不知怎么改。我想表达的是真正的与众不同在于在某个方面做的出色，这才是父母希望我们做的。
2.这篇文章还有错误么,有的话回答的时候麻烦复制下原文在中间空的一行注明一下;
3.我才疏学浅，况且第一次写这么长的英语作文，实在是尽力了。
虽然老师不看好我去参加比赛。可是我还是很要强，想试试。
有什么高级的用法啦句子啦可以改进我的作文，也欢迎改在下面。
4.我写了好多and啊， and， and ，and ，读着就挫啊，换几个掉要咋办?
好了，大家综合改进吧。 万谢 。采纳后会再悬赏 。快快。
题目是不是太俗，也帮忙改一下吧。
楼下香辣小小蟹，你什么水平，错误越改越多了吧。
文章先前已经给老师看过了，语法错误已基本改过来了。
还有你叫我删删删，字数不够你赔我啊，只能增不能减！！！！！